Thursday, 14 August 2014

Time ticking

Numbers filled up my head when the time goes past.

Tick,tock,tick,tock, I was steering at the clock.It just kept going on and on.You can hear the clock beside you.

I stoped the door shung open fast then bullet I went bake slow as a turtle.My mouth opened wideras      like a lion.My boredom stoped the black clouds dissolved the sun is shined bright the door creaked but           Behind the door.I saw the world.I was free at last the boredom tried to creep in but the happiness protected me and I never got bored again. 

1 comment:

  1. Well done Natalie I loved your story!!!.Make sure you edit the story to make sure it makes sense!!

    From: Katelyn Hughes